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Standard Life circulated their policyholders in June 2000. A Special General Meeting is to determine five resolutions, of which Resolution 4 goes as follows:

"That Regulation 9 of the Regulations set forth in the schedule to the Act be amended by the addition of the following as a new Regulation 9A:

‘9A. Notwithstanding the provisions of Regulation 9 where a member who was the holder of a participating policy has assigned or transferred the absolute right to such policy on or before 8 February 2000 the assigneee or transferee of the policy shall be a member in place of the assignor or transferor with effect from the time of the agreement to assign or the agreement to transfer; and such assigneee or transferee shall have the same full membership rights and shall enjoy the same benefits as the assignor or transferor would have had if no assignation or transference had been made and the assignor or the transferor continued to be the policy holder, it being provided for the avoidance of doubt that the said rights and benefits include all money payments or other benefits enjoyed by the policyholder in the event of demutualisation of the Company or the transfer of the whole or part of the Company's business to another company or body'."

 

That last sentence had 161 words. If they had asked us for a redraft, it might have been four sentences, in total 85 words:

" ‘9A. In spite of Regulation 9, members who held participating policies, and agreed on or before 8 February 2000 to assign or transfer them absolutely, also transferred membership of the Company automatically. From the date of that agreement, the assignees and transferees are full members of the Company. They are entitled to all the benefits to which the previous holders would have been entitled. These benefits include any payments or other benefits if the Company is mutualised or its business transferred to another company or body'."

 

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